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julie elder's avatar

Wow. The need for this arises from trauma, doesn’t it? So familiar.

Wendy Parker's avatar

I called it disappearing. I can still do it. Sometimes I need to.

BentButTrue's avatar

Yeah, same game. Still playing sometimes.

Maryellen Brady 💗📚's avatar

Oh my Bent, I feel this one so deeply. 😥

BentButTrue's avatar

As a friend: I hate that.

As a writer: Good it did what it was supposed too.

Gary Mucklow's avatar

The idea of emotional stillness as a game you can 'win' really hit home for me.

I definitely recognise that quiet habit of trying to stay at 'baseline.' Your description of the cost, especially the thinning out of memories, is so well observed.

I really appreciated the ending and the choice to be 'messy' and present instead.

It’s a very human piece of writing.

BentButTrue's avatar

Thanks a lot. I am on this journey of exploring every nook and cranny of who I am. The real me.

Bradley prompts make it easy to wrap those truths in fiction.

Devo/Murphy Carpenter's avatar

I played my whole childhood chilling to see it written

Franky Dyson's avatar

This was so great 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟

Wendy Russell's avatar

Oh. Can relate to this.

Beautiful work, and such a haunting take on the prompt.

Verdant Butterfly's avatar

ok so, wow, i can identify with this on a very, very personal level. ✨🦋

The Circus Dragon's avatar

I'm always so amazed by the way your mind works. This was good. Unique. It made me want to tell people that they don't always have to be Still.

Michèle Breton's avatar

I may have played this game when I was younger. Now I think I play a different version of the game. ✨

BentButTrue's avatar

There were many time I played it over the last two years of caring for Tracy’s mom.

Sometimes it is the only way to get through.